How To Fight The Night

Domd · July 15

Let's give the ladies a shot. Originally wrote this from guys POV. Changed a few to make it work this way.

Just finished it up.

My lyrics using AI

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15054374

When I feel estranged
Deranged, Unarranged
till I can't feel any more
I close my eyes and
arise to the skies
untill I land at your door

Each day it feels like forever
And every night feels like one year
I do some situps
I scribble and nibble
Don't know what to do till im here

Learn how to fight that night
I better learn how to fight the night
Learn how to fight that night
I better learn how to fight the nights

I love your stuff
it's never enough
Yeah, it's rough, tryna get through the week
time's unkind, in the grind
it reminds me
that I still got that wounded mystique

But then I get my momentum
And I can feel you on my skin
Your playful smile
It shines through your window
And that voice that says "come on in"

Learn how to fight that night
I better learn how to fight the night
Learn how to fight that night
I better learn how to fight the night

in between the pain in my life
the rain in my life
there's you
and all I think about is rolling around
rolling around with you
I get this feeling in the pit of my heart
the pit of my soul it's ok
come and hold me and I'll never let go
never let go...
no way
Learn how to fight that night I better learn how to fight the night Learn how to fight that night I better learn how to fight the nights

sidshovel · July 15

@Domd Nice song that, enjoyed it very much. Good job on the harmonies, very tricky getting Ai to deliver what you want but you nailed it here. Lyrics and music flowed nicely throughout, good piece, well done.

Sid

Domd · July 15

@sidshovel
Thanks yeah, it takes alot of work, this whole copyright stipulating that human intervention must be present. I the human , did alot more work than ai.

Sit there and listen to dozens of takes and gur each section, and still in end feel like it could be better with a bit more control.

Thanks for you ears!

RainyDayMan · July 15

This is a solid track. But after hearing your "Genius in Jean" track, I can't help but wonder how it would sound if you did it yourself!

This song feels all about the sound and the rhymes to me. Nothing wrong with that, not a criticism, it just isn't a message or narrative driven song. It all felt smooth as I was listening.

Solid pop.

Domd · July 15

Thanks @RainyDayMan . I will eventually do everything myself.

This is more introspective from the heart.

I think the hook makes it what it is.

Maybe this could be the 5th track on side B.... Lol

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