Genius in Jeans

Domd
New Jersey
I have about 5 versions of this lyric. I favor these two, complete opposite. One makes the singer seem sensitive and honest respect, the other is Rock n roll and closer to how it's written..
I honestly think my own version is better but I can't that kind of sound
Notice Tom Petty vocals in one version. Please help with a version you like better
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14834644
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14982496
I honestly think my own version is better but I can't that kind of sound
Notice Tom Petty vocals in one version. Please help with a version you like better
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14834644
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14982496
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My lyrics trigger Ai
Well, she's a genius when she walks
a genius when she talks
a groove so sweet
She could make world peace
and everybody grows
from all the things she knows
she's a genius in jeans
she's a genius
And it's rubbin off on me
I saw her at that brand new target store Reaching for the top row
go one more
She glided down and said
"Man , these ain't cheap"
I said '"I only got a peak"
She walked away with heels like
deaths been beat
I'd love to live forever at her feet
I let her go, but hey yo, I don't know
I saw her intellect glow
Well, she's a genius when she walks
a genius when she talks
a groove so sweet
She could make world peace
and everybody grows
from all the things she knows
she's a genius in jeans
she's a genius
And it's rubbin off on me
Next week at the mall
And there she goes
Breaking up a fight between
Two big bros
All she had to do is walk on by
They had denim in their eyed
Now, she's creating jobs here in this town
She could run for Mayor
Win hands down
She could solve a problem
One, two, three
Can you feel the relief?
She's she's a genius when she walks
a genius when she talks
a groove so sweet
She could make world peace
and everybody grows
from all the things she knows
she's a genius in jeans
she's a genius
And it's rubbin off on me
Well, she didn't go Harvard
but she's a bachelorette
a master of movement
a doctor of sweat
Well, she's a genius when she walks
a genius when she talks
a groove so sweet
She could make world peace
and everybody grows
from all the things she knows
she's a genius in jeans
she's a genius
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Love it! I definitely prefer the first version, which is yours I think.
"a groove so sweet" sums up the first version for me. It just glides effortlessly. The subdued vocal feels just right.
Really this should be on a record somewhere. I was bopping away with it the whole way. Really engaging.
Wonderful song. Really like it.
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Thanks man, appreciate that. I will likely sing it myself , but I like that production and feel, some kind of hybrid production. See what I can add to it0
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You could have written this for Jarvis Cocker out of Pulp, he would have given this the justice it deserves.
It's an outstanding piece of work that deserves a much greater exposure.
Joy to listen,
Thank you,
Sid
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@sidshovel thanks! Great review. Never heard of Jarvis or his band will search it.
There's a few loose parts in this I want to tighten it up at later time
But least I know few people like it, thanks again!0 -
Not just like it - love it! I've been returning to listen to it multiple times.
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@RainyDayMan thanks!. Definitely one i wanna keep working with.0
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After listening not both I prefer 1. Just this. Wonderful lyrics.
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