When the hens, come home to roost
https://audius.co/sidshovel/when-the-hens-come-home-to-roost (right click then open link in new tab,) to open song. lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
On the day the Big Beautiful Bills**t passed.
All my political songs are only about what passes for politicians these days, nothing else!
[verse 1]
Gonna wish, you didn't act so rash,
said an' did, the things you done.
Agreed to do, all that stuff for cash,
comin' clean, that you haven't won.
[verse 2]
Bills you passed, pullin' fingernails,
behind closed doors, waterboardin'.
Vote for it, or you'll end up in jail,
retribution, people been hoardin'.
[chorus]
When the hens, come home to roost,
they're gonna crap, all over ya persian.
House'll, wanna hear your version,
of how ya managed, to cook their goose.
[verse 3]
Votes were counted, 1%'s no good,
power's gone, new sheriff's in town.
Sold down the river, now a flood,
rats they left, you're on your own.
[verse 4]
The rich, well they got even richer,
future generations, they're poorer.
Middle class, they feel trashed,
on the day, that MAGA crashed.
[chorus]
When the hens, come home to roost,
they're gonna crap, all over ya persian.
House'll, wanna hear your version,
of how ya managed, to cook their goose.
[bridge]
Rare as rockin' horse droppin's,
no one's ownin' up to the mess.
Chinese, circle the corporate body,
food kitchen insists on formal dress.
[final chorus]
When the hens, come home to roost,
they're gonna crap, all over ya persian.
House'll, wanna hear your version,
of how ya managed, to cook their goose.
[outro]
The Senate voted for impeachment,
this time, prison was where he'd go.
Supreme court, paid the money back,
Orange man, took a plane to Moscow.
Comments
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@sidshovel - I am trying a "right click" on the audio link on a MacBook and I get an "Access Blocked" message. Tried it several times to no avail. Am I doing something wrong here? Do you have the music somewhere else?
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@sidshovel Oh, I assume you're talking about Trump's Big UGLY Bill? Lol! Last I knew he wanted it to sign on his desk, today, 'Independence' Day, USA..
Lotta BAD crap in that bill; the scariest of all: AI Police State coming soon!! Oh, boy, I just can't wait!!!
Now for a listen...cool song, Sid! Meaningful. Your allusion to justice is grand. Don't you wish it were true?
Renee 😍
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I can guarantee, Moscow wouldn't be one of the places he's going. Unless it's an act, Putin really isn't fond of Trump, and it just dawned on trump recently, that he was played by Putin, which was funny.
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I was drinking a coffee listening to this. Bad idea! I nearly choked when I got to:
they're gonna crap, all over ya persian.
and this one:
Rare as rockin' horse droppin's,
Nice to see you haven't lost your touch!
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Wasn't planning to post, but the Orange Man gets my back up! Failed real estate agent acting like a latter day Neville Chamberlain.
Thanks for your time, won't bother you for a while, scurry back under my rock.
Sid
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Just saw a meme that said "If there's any justice, Big Beautiful Bill will be the name of Trump's cellmate". Too good not to share!
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Now that's made my day!
Thanks for that
Sid
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MY champion song!!!! I ageee totally and laughed a lot at reading and listening!!!
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Blown away. I listened to it 3 times in a row.
Love the Intro. The Panpipe sounds incredible. Do you sing yourself? If so... 10 out of 10! Just amazing. Overall production quality: Top Notch i would say. The Outro-Keyboard is a little bit short for my taste. Could go on for at least 10 more seconds.
The beat surprised me in a good way. Was not expecting this much upbeat after the intro. Awesome!
The Drums in the choruses sound a little bit strange, the cymbals i believe. Distorted or something ? Strange to my ears. Maybe not used to it.
I love the line "The rich, well they got even richer, future generations, they're poorer."
Reminds me of a Song from 1985 from a German Band i loved to death in my youth. Böhse Onkelz.
already translated from German:
"Unemployed youth have already become normal today, the rich are getting richer, everything else does not matter."
Timeless i guess =)
In fact the rich got so rich over the last 5 years, they could end world poverty and world hunger 22 times without getting any poorer themselves.
i had to look up some phrases i am not familiar with. Rockin horse... i know from a Gym Course, it is an exercise :D
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Full disclosure: as written below the link, lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
Thank you for your considered feedback, most appreciated.
A rocking horse is a child's wooden toy horse the kid sits on an rocks back and forth.
hence the saying "as rare as rockin' horse droppin's (crap/shit), British idiom.
Hope that helps,
Once again, thank you for time and consideration.
Sid
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Well Sid, we haven't spoken in a while. I like your words and I share your opinion about the orange jesus. Yes, rare as rocking horse s*** is part of my vocabulary too...no surprise as we're something like 65 miles apart!
Here's a very brief critique about the track itself. It's what I've come to expect from Ai at this time. A tidy arrangement with some interesting variety in the instrumentation. There's one or two places where the Ai shows it's weakness. Ocassional vocal phrasing and pitching which somehow doesn't sound natural. Also, the production, if we can call it that, lacks dynamics to my old ears. But I know that this will only get better.
Anyways, Au revoir (to adios!) for now,😀
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@ChrisPrice Thank you Chris, you have no idea how much I value your opinion, especially this one.
To me, Ai is and always has been just a tool, a blunt chisel at best. A few steps better than bangin' a biscuit tin, but that's all I've got to play with. The shortcomings you point out are valid and systemic within most Ai models. Bill and I are hobbyist lyricists playing with a toy, that gets increasingly more frustrating the more we use it. I also echo Bills thoughts re live musicians, there's more to music than pressing buttons and there always will be.
Once again, my heartfelt thanks for extending the hand of friendship,
Sincerely,
Sid
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Hey Sid,
Like others, I love some of the phrases - very funny. I was a bit confused about what the rocking horse droppings actually referred to, though 🤔
As Chris says, some slight problems with the AI phrasing, particularly "food kitchen insists on formal dress," but I guess that's the nature of the beast.
A good song, which might ruffle a few feathers.
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Thanks Gavin, appreciate your comments, love the pun, should have included that in the song.
I never get hung up on Ai glitches, I did early on but now I give it a couple of goes to improve/remove and if I can't, I move on.
Sid
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@sidshovel
I love that pan flute hook, and I like the melody. I don't normally write anything political, I did write a song called big beautiful bill, when Trump and musk were bickering.
I like some of the lines and it sounds great
Only concern is the funny lines might get missed cause it's mostly a serious piece.
I enjoyed listening, good work0
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