The serpent is God
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God story Bill, valid as any other. Easy to follow, so I thank you for that. It flowed nicely and supported your thesis.
I read the lyrics twice before listening and I had a more spiritual take in my mind for the music. I was a bit surprised therefore when I noted you prompted Suno for a rock take on it. First run, I have to admit, I wasn't taken to it, second fared no better. IMO, the music seemed at odds with the story and theme. Totally personal preference and no doubt you're going to get many who love the choice.
Since I am a storyteller, the music and vocals are secondary to me anyway. I loved the lyrics, the story structure and the message, full marks for that.
Thanks for posting Bill, always good food for thought.
Sid
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Thanks for the listen and comment Welp, after 15 takes of getting nothing but screaming, as I was going for a more gothic feel, this seemed to work. I'm curious what prompt you would use, and I'll give that a shot. thanks.
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@bhengen Give this a run Bill,
Prompt
uplifting, epic, melodic, excellent Male singer, building in intensity, orchestra, violin, flute, Male vocalist, love, passionate,Rock, Pop rock, Pop, Melodic, Energetic, Playful, Bittersweet, Eclectic, Melancholic, Anthemic, Lush, Futuristic, Epic, Orchestra, Flute, Violin, Instrumental
Sound
Pop-rock orchestra fusion, soaring male vocals, spiritual, dramatic dynamic builds, violin and flute accents
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this does sound much better.. odd, but didn't of putting it to an inspirational type vibe ;) - https://suno.com/s/U0xygETw77Xn8PHl
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Bill,
Ran it for you check it out here
https://www.riffusion.com/song/5dcf1805-d038-4ef2-8f5a-724256065f84
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That sounds good also.
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Personally I prefer yours although mine sounds more Goth to me.
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Actually, they both are equally as good. Honestly, not really expecting this to go anywhere, based on the lyrics. but it was fun to write. this is actually the 3rd draft.
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That's the benefit of Ai over session players, you can vary the concept in seconds.
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So very true. and not as spendy :)
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Bill,
I am closing this thread.
TSF is not a religious site, but I do require that members exhibit respect towards other members - including their beliefs.
You've posted something that I regard as a provocative attack on Christianity and disrespectful towards members who hold those beliefs.
You can hold whatever beliefs you choose. You can post songs praising Atheism, or any other viewpoint. But when you attack someone else's beliefs you've crossed a line as far as TSF is concerned. Please do not post similar songs in future.
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