Bob Dylan, Bloomingdale's and Baltimore Dates

Domd
New Jersey
This is one of my favorites only regret is that it's a female singer it's a guy pov, but I simply couldn't find a better melody so I used it.
I'll probably end up doing this myself.
My lyrics triggering ai.
This will be my last post for while ,Trolls can't be happy.
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She sings "Blowin in the Wind"
in a subway station
Queen Jane Approximately a quarter to four
by five o'clock she wants to shop
heads to her favorite department store
Yeah, she darts through downtown Baltimore
plenty of time, but don't be late
it's a typical Friday night for her
She's got a typical Friday date
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
Now she's "like a rolling stone"
or a tambourine man's girl
but she's positvely fourth street
in the economic world
Her old man, he was the real estate king
and he left her lots of dough
here she shops again at Bloomingdales
bought some shiny gift for Joe
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
But it ain't me Babe, no no no
It ain't me she's looking for....babe
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
I'll probably end up doing this myself.
My lyrics triggering ai.
This will be my last post for while ,Trolls can't be happy.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14832058
She sings "Blowin in the Wind"
in a subway station
Queen Jane Approximately a quarter to four
by five o'clock she wants to shop
heads to her favorite department store
Yeah, she darts through downtown Baltimore
plenty of time, but don't be late
it's a typical Friday night for her
She's got a typical Friday date
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
Now she's "like a rolling stone"
or a tambourine man's girl
but she's positvely fourth street
in the economic world
Her old man, he was the real estate king
and he left her lots of dough
here she shops again at Bloomingdales
bought some shiny gift for Joe
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
But it ain't me Babe, no no no
It ain't me she's looking for....babe
Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates
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Love the alliteration there on "Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates"
I didn't find the female vocalist an issue. It's a third person perspective, so for me it worked fine either way. The Bridge suggests that perhaps the narrator is attracted to her, but that could still work too.
I like the slice of life feel to it.
I enjoyed the Dylan references spread throughout, and the hint of harmonica.
The background music felt slightly "fuzzy"? I know you don't control that. Fortunately the vocals were still clear, and this is a vocal driven song. The chorus didn't quite have that catchy sing a long factor, but again out of your control.
Good lyric!
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