1984 Blues

Sad as it may seem, this song depicts the enslavement the powers-that-be want for humanity. This may not be what you see and prayerfully, all of it doesn't come to fruition. Any constructive feedback is appreciated. Thanks!
Just noticed my rhyme scheme differs from verse to verse, dang....now how did that happen? Probably 'cuz I wrote some of it while working on my phone and then the rest when I got home at my computer. Oh, well, such is life.
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1984 BLUES
V1
They don’t want you on a plane
They don’t want you on a train
They don’t want you in a car
They don’t want you going very far
They want you on a scooter
Home on your computer
AI as your tutor, yeah
V2
Oh, and they want you behind a gate
Being nobody great
Dependent upon the state
Psychotropics, the bait
Oh, and they want you on a scooter
Home on your computer
A blowup doll your suitor
CHORUS
Oh, and you can’t say Orwell
No, you can’t say Orwell
No, you can’t say Orwell didn’t have a clue
Awh, ‘cuz looks like 1984 has come true, yeh
V3
They don’t want you on a plane
They don’t want you on a train
They don’t want you in a house
Want you timid as a mouse
Oh, and they want you on a scooter
Home on your computer
AI as your tutor
[Music]
V4
Oh, and they want you tracked and traced
On earth, every single face
The entire human-race
They want us erased
Oh, and they want you on a scooter
Home on your computer
A blowup doll your suitor, yeah
CHORUS
Oh, and you can’t say Orwell
No, you can’t say Orwell
You can’t say Orwell didn’t have a clue
Awh, ‘cuz ooks like 1984 has come true..
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i'm lost on this one :) 🤣
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@bhengen it's some of what the future holds according to the powers-that-be documentation; Agenda 2030, New World Order (or whatever the heck they're callin' it these days). Their so-called, Utopia.
Renee
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You're definitely getting your message across!!
Some nice lines there. 'A blowup doll your suitor" that made me giggle.
I can enjoy this without needing to agree with you.
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Renee, what can I say?? I can't help but laugh to keep from crying. You had some really good truths in the lyrics filled with humor.
This is what you call a win-win! Touchdown.
I always enjoy your songs.
Thanks for sharing.
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Ah, I stay away from politics. I kept getting irritated, so I stopped following.
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