Don't Run Me Down

Hello good people; the best people in the world, Songwriters! Having a ball here on TSF! This song, I wrote for my dear friend, Patrick aka 'Zoner', who I hadn't seen in some time. Back in the day, we'd sit at the park at our favorite picnic table taking turns, coming up with lines for songs. Lots of fun, great memories. We had a falling out over the Covid-mess and politics in general thus, we stayed distant for awhile, till he called me up on the phone, had a decent conversation, went to help him moving into his new condo, and then....
This song is a result of the heart-wrenching feeling I got at how much he had aged in so little time. The title came from his own lips as V2 describes. I tried to re-color the hook/title each time around so it would have different meanings. Don't know if I pulled it off as well as it could be. Anyway, I appreciate your feedback, suggestions, comments. Sorry, I got long-winded on this one...it must be the weekend...yaaaaay!!!
And as suggested by some of you, recently, I went on my own on this one; guitar/vocal, stripped down. Though, I cheated a bit, grabbed a pretty chord progression from a backing track on YouTube. So, there's that..
For a listen ==> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/dont-run-me-down
DON’T RUN ME DOWN
Can’t you see I’m on my last leg?
My heart’s been through the mud
That’s the feeling I got when I saw my friend today
I could see it in his eyes he’s had enough
And it occurred to me as I was drivin’ home
A strong man is now delicate
And getting old is a sum-gun
And that freight train ain’t no stoppin’ it
[Chorus]
Don’t run me down
Don’t run me down
Oh, ‘cuz if you run me down, I may never come around
Don’t run me down
And while I’m ten years younger than him
Feel that bulldozer strike my bones
But I was glad I could help my friend today
Lord knows, he shouldn’t be on his own
And crossing Kroger’s parkin’ lot
A car was coming upon us fast
And with a chuckle, Patrick said to him:
‘Don’t run me down’; all he asked:
[Chorus]
Don’t run me down
Don’t run me down
Oh, ‘cuz if you run me down, I may never come around
Don’t run me down
And now that both my parents are gone
There’s that gnawing that I’m next
And I pray to God I’m not a nuisance to anyone
Staying independent I’ve done my best
And should I witness old-age up close
I pray I take my final breath in peace
And may my name be in the Book of Life
May I finally find relief
[Chorus]
Don’t run me down
Don’t run me down, Lord
Oh, ‘cuz if You run me down, I may never come around
Oooooh-ooooh, Oooooh-oooooh
[Chorus]
Don’t run me down
Don’t run me down, Lord
Oh, ‘cuz if You run me down, I may never come around
Don’t run me down
Don’t run me down, Lord
‘Cuz if You run me down, I may never…I may never come
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© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Released
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@HummerWisdom - It is one of the most surrealistic experiences to see somebody that was strong is now weak. at least he didn't jump in front of the car, that would have been horrific. never heard the term sum-gun, had to look it up :)..
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@bhengen thanks so much, Bill and 'sum-gun' I stole from mine and Toney Wrights @Cove song, "Greedy Sum-Guns", our very own made up word 'cuz we originally set out to call it "Greedy Sum-B**ch*s" and then we changed it so it would be more widely accepted such as her on TSF. I'm glad we changed it and for certain crowds could sing it otherwise.
Thank you for your feedback. Now, I'll hafta Google sum-gun.. 🤣
And no, Patrick didn't jump out in front of the car. I said he's old but NOT suicidal!! (far as I know) No....Pat loves life, still, in spite of it all!
Renee
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Thats a decent song Renne , Well like the saying goes never talk religion or politics
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Songs like this one have to come from the heart - as it does here. I can hear the feelings come through.
Old age is a b**, and the alternative is worse!
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@RainyDayMan yes, so they say the alternative is worse. Unless, of course there is a Heaven!! 😊 And what a wonderful place to believe in!
PS: hung out with Pat and his friend Brian, which I hadn't done in the longest time; we jammed on each or our new songs, had a blast! Trying hard not to say the wrong things as in the Covid-past of which grew us apart. And I even got invited to perform at a Writer's Night that Brian runs this coming Friday! ☺️
Renee 💌
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Excellent! Enjoy!
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