Dirty Dancing Demons
Words - Me; Vocals - Suno
https://suno.com/s/RgT6OB3FMlcYalXb
wasn't originally fond of the music, but it's decent hit on Audius. so I'll leave it :)
[Verse 1]
In the middle of a dark misty valley
Sound of rhythmic drums fill the air
Imps and sprites and pixies and fairies
Dancing around a fire, all without care
[Verse 2]
Suspended in the middle of the fire's glow
Are the ones they call the devils three
Otherwise known as the Dirty Dancing Demons
They grant your wish to set your soul free
[Chorus]
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, take me away
I'm in a place, where I don't wanna stay
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, hear my plea
This place, once home, no longer for me
[Verse 3]
I met this odd fellow, in the town square
Gave me a mushroom, and said not to tell
He disappeared soon after I devoured it
Next thing I know, I'm falling down a well
[Verse 4]
I landed in the valley with quite the thud
Startled the imps, sprites, pixies and fairies
Also caught the interest of the demons three
Who pointed, laughed, and cruelly mocked me
[Chorus]
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, take me away
I'm in a place, where I don't wanna stay
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, hear my plea
This place, once home, no longer for me
[Verse 5]
The next I know, I'm weeping at their feet,
Well hooves, but that's, splitting hairs
In loud booming chorus of demonic voices,
We'll grant your wishes, only if you dare
[Verse 6]
Dare what, I pondered, what do they want
A granted wish in exchange for my soul
Seems reasonable, I thought to myself
Suddenly, sounds of ominous bells toll
[Chorus]
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, take me away
I'm in a place, where I don't wanna stay
Oh, Dirty Dancing Demons, hear my plea
This place, once home, no longer for me
[Bridge]
Oh, but there's always a catch, always
A riddle solved before I get what I desire
Get it right and your wish is granted,
Get it wrong, you're dancing by the fire
[Outro]
In the distance a man lands with a thud
Startling the imps, fairies, sprites, and me
A wish granted was never to be, just a lie
I can't believe I fell for such trickery
Comments
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There is so much to love. The first is the chorus and it's what stood out the most. The change up was great!
The message 'appears' to be of kicking a drug addiction. I could be totally wrong. :-)
Nonetheless, I think you nailed it, and I enjoyed "Dirty Dancing Demons"
Keep them coming!
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Sounds like a Metal band with all that going on
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@ElvisNash - There is a joke metal band called GWAR that I modelled the music after. :).. I wrote this in about 15 minutes. It took longer to get the music right. but has rec'd a couple of comments about inspiration, more views, likes and reposts than expected. Go figure 😂
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Reads like an acid trip! Very vivid.
The 6 verses fit well because of the tempo of the music.
Musically I like the choruses and Bridge more. The vocal on the verses is a bit and harsh and croaky for my taste, though it fits the metal genre.
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Thanks for the comment. That's also what I thought when I first heard it. the verses were abrupt. I was about to remix , but i got some encouraging comments, so I left it alone. I also listed to GWAR, and suno essentially gave me what I asked for.
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@bhengen ain't even listened yet and am quite taken by your lyric: My favorite is Verse 3; gave me a chuckle. Most captivating story from the get-go to the end.
A REAL headbanger! Perfect for the story!!
Renee 😍 very cool song, Bill! Love, love, love your lyric!!!
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@HummerWisdom - Thanks renee.. did have a bit of fun making this up on the spot :)
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@bhengen what's your secret? shhhh...
Renee
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be a bit mental 😂. or unhinged is what I was called in another forum. 😂
I had dancing demons stuck in my head. then thought of the movie dirty dancing, so it became dirty dancing demons.
The chorus popped into my head soon after the title.
Verse 1 - I thought of midsummers night dream.
Verse 2 - I had to tie in the demons to the chorus. Demons three just came to me.
Verse 3 - I was thinking of Morrocco and meeting a Jinn, but thought of alice in wonderland
Verse 4 - A variation on an event that happened in my life, wanted to tie it back to verse 1 & 2
Verse 5 - I thought feet, then remembered they have hooves. the wizard of oz scene with the man behind the curtain
Verse 6 - I seem to get duped a lot, so this seems plausible to me 😂
Bridge - The bridge scene from Montey Python and the holy grail.
Outro - How I ended up, upside down in my truck (long story).
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@bhengen never for once thought ya'd give your secret away! Pretty cool writing process on this one, Bill!
Renee 🤩
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@HummerWisdom - not a secret :)
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