Crossroads
Words - me, Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/BlSgcJjWzAVjljT4
[Verse 1]
Standing at the crossroads
What do you expect to find?
Riding golden unicorns
Circumventing an unkind world
[Verse 2]
The truth you seek, your path
Is in your hands, absolute
Your answers are beyond crossroads
Always was, except in your mind
[Bridge]
True happiness, breaks sad shackles
Liberating from those chains
[Verse 3]
The crossroads, not your shelter
Seldom was, only in your mind
The path is green, below your feet
Sunny rays, in a world growing kind
[Outro]
Eternal peaceful soul, you'll find resolution
Comments
-
mystical and also very soothing to listen to. An excellent choice of music to accompany the lyrics,
0 -
@sidshovel - thanks sid. was trying for a porcupine trees vibe without mimicking them
0 -
This is really nice. The music is a wonderful choice for the lyric. They seem to match beautifully.
And a positive finish, that's nice. Certainly conveys that it's all in our head, and a matter of perspective and choice.
Good write!
0 -
@RainyDayMan - Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it. I was trying for minimalist, yet relatable.
0 -
Then I reckon you got there!
0 -
This is beautiful and it has me very emotional. This is a good thing because I love, love, it! I feel free when I listen to your song.
Thanks for bringing me a moment of peace.
Bravo! Well done.
0 -
Thanks tammy.. not fond of the phrase breaks sad shackles.. I think i can do better :)
1 -
I think it's easy sometimes to get hung up on words/phrases we believe could be better. Bit like finishing a jigsaw and finding there's a piece missing, you get fixated on that rather than the rest of the picture. One thing I've learnt from you Bill, is to appreciate the whole rather than the detail. I don't get bothered with wrong spellings, syntax, grammar, etc any more, it's irrelevant to the whole.
Sid
0 -
@sidshovel - 1/2 of it's intended and the other 1/2 not.. 😂I just realized in another song that I wrote taught when I meant taut. Found that out an hour ago when I was making the song more graphic :) what's funny is that like you guys, ChatGPT, didn't flag it as it thought that's what I meant. also 😂. ChatGPT, said I fixed the spelling mistake, changed taught to taut, or did you mean taught 😂. Nope.. it's now corrected
0 -
Bill. you lost me after @sidshovel,
1 -
There's golden unicorns at the cross roads ?
Well its abstract as always
Good job
1 -
@ElvisNash - it's not the same crossroads as in the robert johnson song.
0 -
No kidding
1 -
@bhengen Very pretty song. And how true. I suspect few ever attain 'true happiness' but it is a goal worth shooting for.
Renee 💌
0 -
@HummerWisdom - Thanks for the comment.. It all depends on what your definition of true happiness is. 🤔😁
1 -
@bhengen I'll know true happiness when I feel it whatever it is! Lol!
Renee
0
Howdy, Stranger!