This is Your Hallelujah
Pick up the lines
that lightning scores
across the waking sky.
Feel the shower of stars
on your face
like soft lashes
urging you to move
and not look back.
Who are we to think about another way
who would we be if we didn’t.
there’s nothing
up above or down below
that’s gonna change
my love for you,
even when a strong push
comes to shove and rules
The brightest thing I know,
down to the core,
is the memory
lodged in my head
of your face unmoving
on the window ledge
as I returned
semi-conscious from the war.
What we’ve got coming
after this debacle we’re in
deserves the word Hallelujah
Tell me everything has changed
tell me nothing would have changed
if it weren’t for you
walking along the river
where fortune flows.
This is your Hallelujah
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Really cool bluesy feel in your trademark style.
vivid lines that evoke emotional visions.
well played, well written.
Thanks for posting
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I love the way you sing Hallelujah!
I'm afraid this one isn't communicating much to me. If there's meant to be a message in it, then I'm not getting it.
Done in your trademark style.
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Hey RC , little abstract for me on not making sense . Sounds cool
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You doing what you do and I've come to love it. Keep em comin'😀
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