Unhinged

Words - me.. Music - Suno

https://suno.com/song/9ba380bd-e64c-4657-86ac-d821a3bcec8d?sh=vCzaDc7GFMgeAo9A

Have fun with this one :) :) :)

[Verse 1]

Purply prickly pickle eaters

She's so barren, you couldn't breed her

A house is for the louse mouse

Without a mouth, you couldn't feed her


[Chorus]

I am the wombat clutter cat 

When I run, I go titter tat

When I laugh, I go tee hee hee

Spouting wings transparent and free


[Verse 2]

Shoomba loomba watta toomba

Stuck in marshmallow shoes sticky wicky

I sneed at your breedle breed

Nonsensical pastry puffs go licky licky


[Chorus]

Whose the good wombat clutter cat 

When It runs, It goes tittery tat

When It laughs, It goes you see me

Transparent spouted wings frosty free


[Verse 3]

Fat clock hands tick non time

I see my mind, but it doesn't see me

A flavor of colors muted blue hues

My eyes jump ship and climb black trees


[Chorus]

There's the good wombat glitter cat 

When It runs, It goes pittery pat

When It screams, Please look at me

I'm the most silliest, is what I be


[Verse 4]

The fox paradox cast a pox

While the lock blocks mostly thoughts

The blackish raven glistens red

Tandem Penguins is what I mostly fought


[Outro]

My energy wains slightly vainly

What I thought my thought could see

Hidden mystical forest of obscurity

Three eyes fly trippily universally 

Comments

  • Was this one inspired by "I am the walrus" by any chance?

    I can see an emphasis on the sounds reflected there.

    For me, a song is a chance to communicate something to the listener, whether through the words, mood or music. I'm not getting much from this one, so it's not for me I'm afraid!

  • bhengen
    bhengen usa
    edited March 25

    @RainyDayMan - No, it's not really about anything. My thought is to enter it in a song writing competition, to see what scores I get. But you have to admit that sticky wicky and licky licky is catchy :)

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Like Walrus, product of the wacky baccy mind

  • @sidshovel - needed to get that out of my system. I was going to submit it to a lyric contest, but think I'll just keep it to myself for now. they might think I'm mocking the system, or something like that.

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    @bhengen Very wise Bill, very wise! I actually understand how writing work such as this can clear the mind to move on to other things.

    Probably not the case with lyric judges or Owen for that matter!

  • @sidshovel - I still like this song.. and how sudo handled the lyrics is pretty amazing :)..

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited March 25

    You must be a rocket scientist to come up with that Bill. lyric contests are cash cows . They usually have pics of big stars

    Sounds good

  • @ElvisNash - no, the lyric contest is on another forum. it would be pointless to spend money on a joke song. just to see if the response.. thanks for the comment. what's sad is that only I, chatGPT, Gemini, Copilot and a chat bot find it funny :)..

  • What the heck were you smoking...? Can I have some!🤣

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