The nightmare begins
[verse]
In the cellar there dwells a creature;
no eyes have ever seen.
When the curtain of darkness closes.
He creeps into your dreams.
[pre chorus]
Up the steps on catlike feet;
He greets the night's cast.
Lust, greed and depravity;
priests of a black mass. [Chorus]
The curtain rises, the curtain rises.
The nightmare begins;
The nightmare begins.
[verse]
He summons terror from its dungeon.
with its shackles and chains.
He releases your inner demons,
to revel in your pain.
[pre chorus]
He whispers his directions.
but the cast knows their roles.
They’ve listened in on your thoughts.
Been places you won’t go.
[chorus]
The curtain rises, the curtain rises;
The nightmare begins.
The nightmare begins.
[Bridge]
Your pulse begins to quicken.
You’re sickened by what you see.
Reviled,repulsed.
disgusted
by your part in the scene.
[verse]
He’s a sly one, he's a magician.
The illusions are real.
In the cellar of your subconscious
You can see what you feel.
[pre chorus]
He has watched you, he knows you.
What you’ve done, where you’ve been.
So every night in your dreams.
He replays your worst sins.
[chorus]
The curtain rises, the curtain rises;
The nightmare begins.
The nightmare begins.
[outro]
Over and over and over again.
The nightmare never ends.
Comments
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I've got nightmares now, there's scary and then there's bloody scary. This should come with an adult only label. You certainly captured the fear and terror, Carroll. You develop the terror from the first verse and don't let go all the way through.
Brilliant, very Edgar Allan Poe. Well crafted song, words creating visions effortlessly.
Highly recommended
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Love writing this dark stuff! Channeling my younger Heavy metal days/ Sabbath. Not writing near as much as I used to but I think maybe I'm getting better before my witts fizzle out!
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No matter what you turn your mind to, it's significant by the sheer quality of the output.
Your writing is always unique, never formulaic like those on Billboard.
Well done, keep writing.
Sid
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Thanks . Point is to invoke emotion!0
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Definitely creepy! Your sins come to haunt your dreams.
Really good stuff there.
A couple of thoughts:
but the cast knows their roles → but the cast all know their role
The illusions are real → The illusions are very real.
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