If you (AI/Human)
LYRICS: me
MUSIC: Suno AI
If you
feel upset
just think
one thing
brother:
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
If you
Are in a corner
With wounds
and blood my sister
just think
everything
that is not love
is emptiness
One mind
of pure
compassion
and love
That’s all
That’s all
That’s all
Remember
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
One mind
of love
one mind
of peace
and one thousand
of deities
Come now
to protect you
If you
forget
all laws
just think
sister
Everything
that is not love
is emptiness
If you
are lost
in the jungle
Just think
Brother
Everything
that is not love
is emptiness
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Not one of us does really exist on its own
But everybody exist in the mind
Of great love
Om
Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Om
namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
Comments
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How cool is that! Excellent piece, absolutely fantastic. Takes you on a really pleasant trip around your senses.
Very impressive indeed.
Sid
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The music was very different to what I expected just reading the lyric, but it's nice! Lovely spiritual lyric.
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@sidshovel @RainyDayMan
Thank you so much guys! I asked a reggae music because I was thinking of Bob Marley When I wrote the lyrics. It’s an hymn to three great religions, but it wants also to be an hymn to all religions in the world.0 -
I personally, and this is my own opinion, think reggae doesn't work here. it doesn't fit with the lyrics. it made my brain hurt. and I like mixing and matching.. like vanilla wafers and cheeze whiz. and a bit of repetition.
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@bhengen which kind of music would you choose for this?0
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@bhengen for you and also for everyone, if you should like some of my lyrics, feel free to use it for new versions (human or AI). I would be very happy to know that!0
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@Skandha thank you for including my God, Yahusha aka Joshua aka Jesus in this lovely song. And I love the English version but only because I only speak English. Lovely sentiment, lovely song.
Renee 💌
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Very pretty song , You should scroll lyrics on your next one and add a description with keywords , So Google spiders pick them up for more views . Your keywords would be these ...Namo Buddha-ya
Namo Shiva-ya
Namo Joshua
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Thank you Renee, so kind and welcome your comment!❤️
Thank you so much Elvis, that’s a very good suggestion!🙏🤗1 -
if you fix this one , You can run shorts , that pumps up views. A short looks like this , you run it once a day. Depends how many songs you have
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Interesting Elvis! But I think shorts anyway would be viewed by my few followers, isn’t it? Why are they better than the full video?0
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The shorts always have a link to full song in them , it’s advertising , if they like short they go to full song , I see listens go up . Shorts are like a trailer for a movie , same concept .
Realtime
Updating live
65
Views · Last 48 hours..... See what I mean ?
If not promotion and tricks , you're stuck on forums and 4 views. If you want more exposure , you have to play the promotion game. almost all vids scroll lyrics0 -
@ElvisNash Thank you for the advice, I will try! 🙏0
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it takes some work and knowledge to set up a channel right , Your going against big money . But you can get some views with a few simple tricks . You'll notice some vids get 100000's of views like stupid political rants
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That’s true Elvis!!
Anyway I’m glad seeing your beautiful songs can receive lots of views!0 -
You seem to really have a knack for using AI to come up with some beautiful songs. The laid back reggae style with a female vocalist is just right for this simple but beautiful lyric.
Are you still able to make changes? If so, I would correct the bridge something like this:
There's not one of us that exists on their own
But everybody exists in the mind
Of great love
In the first line, I've used "their" as it is often used to include the possibility of both "his" and "her." Italian is lucky in not having this problem :) Another possibility with a slightly different meaning would be "There's not one of us whose existence is theirs alone."
The other corrections are just grammar.
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ha ha ha , A legend in our mind
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Thank you @OnlyGavin ! Do you mean that the term “its” is not correct for people?
Unfortunately I cannot change Just few words of a song in Suno (unless there is some feature I haven’t yet discover…)
But do you think these words sound so “ungrammatical”?
I could cut the song before that point…0 -
@sidshovel Sid, you're more proficient in Suno than I am. Is there a feature Skandha can use to regenerate just a part of a song?
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@OnlyGavin Thank you so much for the correction. I’ll be more careful in the future!! Maybe I could save myself saying that I wanted to emule that strange form of English used by Bob Marley!😂😂😂0
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In Suno, most of the editing tools, including "replace a section" have been placed behind a paywall. Access is by subscription only.
There is a good alternative in Riffusion Ai, currently Beta but for the moment it is free and with a simple but effective "replace a section" feature. I've used this feature a number of times and it does work. Tip: never try to replace individual words or even lines, replace the whole section containing the fault or amendment. If you require any further help, please feel free to contact me.
Sid
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@sidshovel Great Sid!! You saved my song! I will try as soon as I can using @OnlyGavin’s correction🤗
Thanks also to you @RainyDayMan1 -
I found the Reggae to be perfect for this lyric. It was tastefully kept in the background, (or ate least not overwhelming either the rest of the instrumental or the vocal) I thought (before I heard it) that it was an odd choice. After hearing it, I think it's almost perfect. Similar to Cat Stevens in "Tuesday's Dead" in which there is a strong Calypso flavor to the instrumental but you can go years without actually noticing that it's there.
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Thank you for your analysis @Hardtwistmusic . Our great songwriter Paolo Conte too uses old rhythms that are somehow hidden in new forms (example the beautiful “Gioco d’azzardo”)0
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