What Does It Mean Lyrics
I beg God please
I put my hands and head
Inside my knees
I remember the look
Of blue and orange lights
I remember how happy
The pride and joy it meant to me
I drop to the floor
I beg God please
I put my hands and head
Inside my knees
I remember the look
Of blue and orange lights
The pride and joy it meant to me
I drop to the floor
I beg God please
I put my hands and head
Inside my knees
I remember the look
Of blue and orange lights
The pride and joy it meant to me
I drop to the floor
I beg God please
I put my hands and head
Inside my knees
I remember the look
Of blue and orange lights
The pride and joy it meant to me
It seems, I scream, my dream, where's green? Obscene, lost in the scene, lost in the scene, lost in the scene, lost in the scene. . . . . . .my scattered thoughts and shattered dreams, my best friends, God life is mean.
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@Kayla813 I suppose there might be some songs which repeat the same thing over and over again, but I imagine they're far and few between. If this were my song, I'd develop it some more; maybe use some of what you have in your Tag (final words) and go from there. And, like Bill I'm not sure what the orange and blue lights represent other than it was something that brought you joy in some way. As a listener, I'd like to know more.
I hope I've been helpful in some way,
Renee
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You need to develop it more , No songs just repeats the same thing for 4 verses . not in the pro world . I think I mentioned this 6 months to you , to get on a pro level , you should buy his book
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Song doesn't make much sense, i just found out my 2nd ex boyfriend passed away and I was just writing; creative writing can be messy if the feel is right
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I think the repitition is excessive - there are ways of repeating the same thought in diffferent words and ways.
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I think its red lights , if your talking about ambulances , The other 3 verses would have say what happened , like my BF died
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ambulance of red and blue lights
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I dropped to the floor
I begged God please
Why him
I folded my hands
with prayers
With prayers
I remember the look
ambulance of red and blue light
I'm remembering how happy
That boy meant to me
Now its a nightmare
Heart on my knees
Heart on my knees
Verse idea
This is my 2nd boyfriend that passed away
Now it makes a little more sense
Some of the best songs on radio are from nightmares
Thats me in the spotlight losing my religion , that had to be a nightmare
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https://suno.com/song/d8e08e62-2822-4555-8a7a-1d4d90bc7658
Thats what a chorus could sound like
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@ElvisNash I see the Song Doc is at it again! Great suggestions!
Renee
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She can finish the verses
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@ElvisNash I KNOW Kayla certainly CAN finish her song!
Renee
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Yup . I imagine once suno gets to v6 , acoustics will sound cleaner . Details are a good foundation for a song . I could play on there all day , but got work to do
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I like the intensity. Writing from the heart is a good thing. It's a good form of therapy. If that's why you wrote this, then I applaud you.
Connecting with an audience can also be a great form of therapy. The feeling you get when you awake something in them - laughter, sadness, fellow-feeling, recognition ...whatever. If you want that feeling, you have to give us something to relate to. Your description of you sitting on the floor with your head between your knees, imploring God is a great start. Very powerful. It would be even more powerful if you gave us more of a glimpse into why. You don't have to lay it out in detail. It could be done with just one or two well placed lines. Even just the mention of the word "ambulance," if that's what you are implying, as Elvis suggests, though I'm not sure that it is, given the context. Either way, give us a strong hint about where those lights come in :)
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