Trumpov
https://soundcloud.com/sidsshovel/trumpov?si=d290d405728d4989b445626e9d48bddd&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing (right click then open link in new tab,) to open song.
lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
Sensitive Topic: I understand there will be others with alternative views and I respect those, but I am only looking for feedback on the song itself, not a debate on the topic. Please respect my wishes.
U.S.A. R.I.P
[verse 1]
Humpty Trumpov, sat in the Oval,
throwin' around, his custard pies.
In walked a hero, sat down beside him,
an' promptly, got poked in the eye.
[verse 2]
The V.P., couldn't keep still,
Vancesky, went in for the kill.
Peace only comes with diplomacy,
trust my buddy, Vladimir an' me.
[chorus]
The hero, he looked around,
sofa's packed, with bayin' hounds,
lapdogs, the man thought inside,
Maga! Maga!, they barked with pride.
[verse 3]
Trumpov, picked the hero's pocket,
he couldn't resist the urge, in his D.N.A.
Give him a loan, foreclose the debt,
rare minerals, that's the American way.
[chorus]
The hero, he looked around,
sofa's packed, with bayin' hounds,
lapdogs, the man thought inside,
Maga! Maga!, they yelled with pride.
[verse 4]
The hero didn't have a say, it's the U.S.A.,
We'll strike a deal behind ya back.
Blame the war on you, while we backtrack,
strip you bare, then ship it away.
[chorus]
The hero, he looked around,
sofa's packed, with bayin' hounds,
lapdogs, the man thought inside,
Maga! Maga!, they yelled with pride.
[bridge]
Holiday in Sochi, cruisin' on Putin's yacht,
countin' the spoils, how much we got.
Back home, the voters are out of work,
this is not how MAGA's, supposed to work.
[chorus]
The hero, he looked around,
sofa's packed, with bayin' hounds,
lapdogs, the man thought inside,
Maga! Maga!, they yelled with pride.
[verse 5]
Vote for Trump posters, are fillin' the dumpsters.
Russian Oligarchs, taken over Times Square.
Melania's, garage sale of Trumpcoin,
everyone stamped, a picture of her.
[final chorus]
The hero, he looked around,
sofa's packed, with bayin' hounds,
lapdogs, the man thought inside,
Maga! Maga!, they yelled with pride.
[outro]
Fools gallery filled, with fans of Trump.
Each one to a man, is feelin' a chump.
Believed all that spiel, whatever he said.
now every Republican's, a true commie Red.
Comments
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Brilliant. And so very true.😂0
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@sidshovel I can't disagree. And I had to look it up; Trumpov. Is that Russian for Trump? Well, we won't be hearing this song on the radio, cheers!
Renee 🤣
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C"mon sid.... you can't be serious.
OK, I'll play.
The rhyming is good! And you are good with AI
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@bhengen, @HummerWisdom, @IronKnee.
Thank you for making the effort to listen and comment, appreciated.
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@sidshovel no effort whatsoever especially on this one! Lol! 😋
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Ha Ha Ha . Works for me Sid . politics is a joke to me anyway
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It's a good song and the AI does a great job. It's an inspired choice to look through the hero's eyes, rather than just deliver a polemic. On a human level, the listener can relate to what he must have been feeling.
I'm not going to get into the content, as it will only provoke an argument from the fools' gallery you mention in the outro.
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Commently strictly as a song, I think it has a limited shelf life. It's strength is in topical political satire, but other events will likely over take it.
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Thats true , dated after 4 years , I'm sure political songs are rampant right now
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I guess this is an opportunity offered by AI. The production can be churned out so quickly that songs with short shelf lives can still make sense. Before AI, the time taken to achieve a decent production would have meant that the song was no longer topical by the time it was ready.
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Depends if Sid wants to pay to promote it on YouTube
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@ElvisNash, @RainyDayMan, @OnlyGavin,
Many thanks for your comments gentlemen. The song is just political satire, relevant and disposable, like a paper tissue. All my songs are non-commercial and only published here.
One of the first outlets for commercial songs was the travelling minstrel in Medieval Times, their material relied a lot on political and royal satire, today we call it news!
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So you better make them GOOD!
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Agreed as to getting back on topic.
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Ok. This is a warning to all concerned.
Civility to other members is a requirement here. If you don't wish to, or cannot communicate in a reasonable manner to other members find another songwriting website. Failure to do so here will result in a 1 week temporary ban followed by a permanent one.
If you have a problem with another members behaviour, you should Private Message me. It is my job to deal with such things. There is no role for members to police other members.
Nor is it acceptable to derail someone else's song thread especially when they have marked it with the sensitive topic.
If you wish to continue this argument do so privately. This stops here, now or there will be consequences.
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This is a great song - remind me of what Jessie Welles is doing -
These lyrics are masterful - it is hard writing satirically like this and maintaining song structure- you did a brilliant job.
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@jgkojak You have might have missed it, but Sid included the following text at the top:
Sensitive Topic: I understand there will be others with alternative views and I respect those, but I am only looking for feedback on the song itself, not a debate on the topic. Please respect my wishes.
For that reason I have removed the political commentary from your post. Whether supportive or unsupportive, it must not be posted when that text is included. This is a new protocol we are trialling at the moment, and I need your support implementing it consistently.
Please keep an eye out for this text (and you may use it yourself when appropriate), and respect the poster's wishes. It's now mandatory on the forum. Please message me privately if you would like to discuss further.
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Big smile from holland sid .0
Howdy, Stranger!