my future, is my past

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Just finished this, no gods, politicians, feelings or robots were harmed in the making of this song!
The caste system in S.E. Asia places each individual on a kind of societal ladder, rich and religious at the top, you can imagine the bottom. Any relationships between upper and lower is strictly forbidden by families! Every member of the family would be affected by the shame for generations.
[verse 1]
He said I'd thank him one day,
for what he's doin' now.
We're never gonna be a thing,
it would be better, that he go.
[verse 2]
Said, I'm hangin' on for somethin',
I know, I'm never gonna see.
There's no happy-ever-afters,
between the likes, of him an' me.
[chorus]
The dice were thrown, I lost,
born, the bottom of the caste.
There's no escapin', my fate,
my future, is my past.
[verse 3]
His family, would never allow it,
my caste was far too low.
The shame, would be too much,
somethin', that I should know.
[chorus]
The dice were thrown, I lost,
born, the bottom of the caste.
There's no escapin', my fate,
my future, is my past.
[verse 4]
Told me not to, speak of this,
our lives, may depend on it.
We together, didn't happen,
not a word to anyone, quiet.
[chorus]
The dice were thrown, I lost,
born, the bottom of the caste.
There's no escapin', my fate,
my future, is my past.
[bridge]
I didn't tell him, I was pregnant,
turns out, as a father he's a loser.
He, would make me get rid,
hope for better, from my kid.
[final chorus]
The dice were thrown, I lost,
born, the bottom of the caste.
There's no escapin', my fate,
my future, is my past.
[outro]
My son, didn't let me down.
a billionaire, not yet thirty.
A palace, an' his own plane,
only I know, from where he came.
Comments
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@sidshovel - interesting take on the subject. I like the flow of the lyrics, although I did have to read the outro again, to make sure i read it correctly. good music choice as well :)
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Sounds similar to how the USA is becoming as well. The rich and the poor; the gap is closing in. The goal of the oligarchs is to eliminate the mid-class. And of course, the rich don't play by the same rules as the poor; never have, never will.
I like the positive tone of your outro. Yes, it can happen but not all too often, but still there is hope.
Love the groove and the swing of the music!
Renee 💌
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@HummerWisdom - i am so tired of you constant barrage of social commentary. .you've already have made your point.. let it go. and just enjoy the lyrics for what they are.
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Thank you Bill, I'm only here for the songwriting, anything else is unwelcome static.
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Sorry sid, didn’t meant to hijack the post with a rant0
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No apologies necessary, appreciate your comments
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A sitar I think , Very cool Sid and poignant how lyrically it rolls . Maybe Renee should run for congress , nice depressing occupation
Very cool Sid , great hook
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Thanks Elvis. I got bored with Robots, chucks an' demons, started experimenting with alternative sounds.
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Robots chucks an' demons . ha ha ha , Sounds good
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